Phase II Critique

In my last critique I showed a three-panel painting piece. The painting was abstract and really a display of my emotions and state of mind. I really enjoyed the feedback I received from the class and I appreciate everyone’s opinions and suggestions about my work. Some people mentioned that the work felt like night and day fighting. They felt as if it was telling a narrative, or a story. They could see movement and chaos unified as one. The three canvases made them think of three elements, a natural disaster or interactions with energies. They were appreciative of the black at the bottom of the painting because it was a constant throughout the three canvases, unifying them and calming the painting and the viewer. They could see the process in the work and they could tell through my work that my thinking and state of mind has changed from what it used to be in the past. The class suggested I try using oil paint in my next works because it dries slower and can allow me to blend colors more easily. They also suggested I mix my own colors prior to putting them on the canvas. I have taken both of these suggestions to heart and I am currently using oil paint in my new works. I am continuing my interest in abstract art for my Phase III proposal and I am excited to see what these new materials and techniques can help bring to my work. Without the great communication from the class I would not be able to be as confident as I am in the work I am creating. Their suggestions and support really influence me and keep me motivate to follow my instincts and create what feels right.

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